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글의 흐름상 어색한 문장은?
One of the best parts about retirement is all of the free time that you get to fill with things that you enjoy doing. ① However, those entertainment costs might be more than you bargained for when you were building your nest egg. ② According to Andrew Herrig, founder of the financial-advice website The Wealthy Nickel, all the free time you have in retirement can lead you to spend more on entertainment expenses such as shopping, eating out, and other activities. ③ You’ll probably have less time to shop and travel with loved ones, and see more of the world. ④ “Without a good plan to fill the void of time left when you no longer have a 9-5 job, it can be easy to overspend,” he warns.
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However, those entertainment costs might be more than you bargained for when you were building your nest egg.

According to Andrew Herrig, founder of the financial-advice website The Wealthy Nickel, all the free time you have in retirement can lead you to spend more on entertainment expenses such as shopping, eating out, and other activities.

You’ll probably have less time to shop and travel with loved ones, and see more of the world.

“Without a good plan to fill the void of time left when you no longer have a 9-5 job, it can be easy to overspend,” he warns.

흐름상 어색한 문장은 “You’ll probably have less time to shop and travel with loved ones, and see more of the world.”이다.
글은 은퇴 후 늘어난 여가 시간이 오락비 과소비로 이어진다는 내용인데, 이 문장은 “less time”(시간이 더 적다)이라고 해서 흐름과 반대된다.
“However, those entertainment costs …”: 여가의 즐거움을 말한 첫 문장을 받아 비용 문제로 전환한다.
“According to Andrew Herrig …”: 여가 시간이 오락비 지출을 늘린다는 근거를 제시한다.
“Without a good plan …”: 계획이 없으면 과소비하기 쉽다는 경고로 글을 맺는다.